April 17th is my sister's birthday! Her name is Mami. She became 22 years old. She doesn't live together now so she came back home on April 20th. The day, I wake up 12 o' clock because I was tired. After that I had done my homework for daytime alone. My father and mother went to shopping. At 3, my father picked her up. At 6, we started the party. When I was a child, my mother made a birthday cake for children. Recently she have never made it and bought a cake but yesterday my mother made a cake for my sister. I was happy too. I and my sister ate cake. It is delicious. Always, cake is cut into 8 pieces. However, my brother lives my grandmother’s house so my father cut into 6 pieces. I ate too much. I want my mother to make a birthday cake for me on my birthday! Of course I will help.
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I think you mispelled birthday! But the cake looks very delicious! Where did you get it?
Thank you for pointing out my mistake. I will rewrite. By the way, this cake is made by my mother. It was delicious.
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